All Comments on 'The Ravishment of Natalie'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice!!

A little more character description, but great story overall

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Not to bad

Not to bad you had a making of a fantastic story and could of done much more with this but it made me wet none the less so good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
there is one thing i don't understand

if this is a rape fantasy and he is "ravishing" her, why does she sucks his cock instead of let say bite?

lovingfingerslovingfingersover 12 years ago
Mmmmm

Thank you for such a lovely tale!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
well written tale

Natalie is very believable and highly desirable. I would prefer a little more humiliation that would last beyond the moment but the story is great the way it is. Bravo!!

mattbronnermattbronner9 months ago

very hot needs to be longer

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