by indoctrinated
I looked at your stories, each one has Ch. 01 not followed by another chapter. If you're only writing a stand alone stories, having Chapter 1 is confusing, I hate anthers who don't finish what they've started.
For this chapter, I'll say it is a good start, would want to see what comes next.
I want the next part asap please continue this story and start making longer parts make it around 4 pages and make the wife more sluttier..... Please upload fast
Wow, what a fantastic build up! This is exactly the kind of story I love to find on this site. I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm so excited!