All Comments on 'The Real Estate Broker’s Boyfriend'

No story could be this bad unless the author was writing with a translation dictionary. Subject matter is terrible and the story reads like a story on the 10 o'clook news.

I like the premise but what began well but was spoiled when things happened too quickly instead of being allowed to develope.

Loved the premise of the story but it seemed like more of a summary than a story. You should have implemented some dialogue at least. This story could have been great if only you didn't rush through it. Would love to hear it drawn out!!

Please quit now!

This story really turned me on

I loved this story and would like to see you write some more along this line.

I loved this short story of dominance and feminization. Please write some more and make it a little longer. I would love to work in your firm after you used, abused and changed me.

This was a wonderful story and I can not wait for you to write more in this genre.

I had an older real estate who was flirty with men. I was somewhat a fuck toy for her. Perhaps she needed a man to make her feel good. I did what I or she wanted, oral service to her and intercourse as she permitted. You may have wanted to expresss that but left out graphic details.