All Comments on 'The Rebel and the Redcoat'

by DiamondOfDelight

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sexy

Give Captain Hanson a hairy chest, and let her unbutton and remove his shirt!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I loved this! The only thing that took me out of the story was your use of the word "maidenhead," which actually means hymen. Well done, I look forward to reading more of your work.

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