All Comments on 'The Red Line Pt. 03'

Another great chapter, I'm very much enjoying this series!

Amazing work as always, just very sad...

Loved it! 5 Stars!!

This is a great story, well written and gripping. Off to find more from this author.

This is by far the worst of your writings. This series needs to end she is such an hatefull fake person that doesn't deserve any of this.

One of the best stories from one of the best authors on here!!!!!

If you're going to leave mouthy and trashy comments at least own up and use your name!!!!!! But nooooooo you pussy ass sissies hide behind "anonymous" ! !!! I'm an true man and use my signed in account to leave my comments!!!! So stop being a hater!!!! Most likely upset cause ya can't write as story as good as P.C.!!!!! This is a great story and trust me,,,,, it only gets better!!!! Great job Phoenix !!!! Sam....... See look I even used my REAL first name!!!! I ain't no pussy ass sissy!!!!! LOL!!!!

I loved it. Perfection. I loved the last one but this one was even better.

The timing of the tragedy after all the buildup was gratifying and believable. Loved it

I have loved every part of this storyline so far, but the end to this segment made me teary-eyed, which is a first for a Literotica story. Keep up the good work.