All Comments on 'The Red Line Pt. 04'

Fantastic read again love your stories can’t wait for more x

I love your stories. I'll admit that (despite loving superheroes), I like the ones that are more grounded in "reality" more than the heavier sci-fi ones.

This particular series has been one of your best, and Roy and Nina are my favorite protagonists of yours. Please keep it up.

Thank You so much. I love them both. I loved the hope you show in both of them. I hope we get more of these two in future stories.

I was a fan of the story. I enjoyed how they actually fell in love in love, but she very clearly remains the dominant force in the relationship. My issue with it is that I felt as it developed so quickly. I kind of got whipflash from how quick they went from basically hating each other to head over heels in a 2 day period. As whole though, would read again, especially the first few chapters when Nina was purely dominant

I loved it. Absolutely amazing. Their relationship is so flawed yet so perfect if that makes sense. Its beautiful and I love it. You did an amazing job.