All Comments on 'The Red Women and Rose'

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G5902G59026 months ago

Thank for sharing this outstanding story!!! I look forward to reading more of your stories!

NorthJerseyLearnerNorthJerseyLearner6 months ago

Excellent story. Tender…

stewartbstewartb6 months ago

A very good story ... but better proof reading is needed. Not a spelling problem so it would not be picked up. Just using the correct spelled word but not exactly what you really mean. Such as "slop" instead of "slope" or glass of "vine" not "wine" and a few others. Gentle criticism for a really good 1st story. Thanks for writing!

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This profile is to share some of the many naughty stories in my head. I’m not a natural writer but a few years ago started to write for my life partner Ms.Masters, as reading erotic literature was one of her turn-ons and we wanted to explore that more. Because I have written...