by MrJMasters
Thank for sharing this outstanding story!!! I look forward to reading more of your stories!
A very good story ... but better proof reading is needed. Not a spelling problem so it would not be picked up. Just using the correct spelled word but not exactly what you really mean. Such as "slop" instead of "slope" or glass of "vine" not "wine" and a few others. Gentle criticism for a really good 1st story. Thanks for writing!