All Comments on 'The Refusal'

Taking into account that English isn't your first language, this is a quite remarkable - and very hot - piece of work.

Congratulations on having written it so well - many native writers would be only too pleased to write as well! - and have five stars with my thanks and good wishes.

and a strong start to writing for one who advises us that English is not their first language. But you coulda fooled me -- if you hadn't told me, I would never have guessed.

So don't let that bother your future efforts. A good story is a good story, and I hope to see more of your good stories here on Literotica. Take care --

PS: And oh, category choice was fine.

Thank you both for your feedback and your encouragement, it is very much appreciated.