All Comments on 'The Repair'

More from them would be nice.....

did we miss something somewhere?how do they know each other and why does her aunt not hear them in the house fucking their brains out?

Guess it was just a fantasy story. Cute though

...how do they know each other? The ending surprised me, although that could explain why he wasn't discussing how much she owed first?

The sex scene seemed a bit rushed and not quite thorough on describing their individual sensations, from buildups to orgasms. The history of how Storm got there seemed believable though. It would be nice to know the location, since they say "ma'am" that leads me to believe it's the South.

Detail it more and look for places like the above to fill in. Otherwise, good story. 4.

They acted like strangers toward each other for most of the story.

Then at the end they obviously knew each other.

Some story twists work, some seem gratuitous.

Damn, I want Dillon Now! Love the story........

This was a really good story. The plot was entirely believable but the character development needs tweaking. I loved the fact there was not a bunch of sex sounds rather good details. Keep writing.

If her bra barely contains her DDD bobs then get a new bra??? ://///

Great story, and of course the clue is in the names!!