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All Comments on 'The Replacement Slave Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Needs editing

Lots of simple mistakes in this. Good idea, but forced and compressed. I'll abstain from voting at this point. Just try to resolve your writing glitches.

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsabout 9 years ago
Great start!

Can't wait to see how she uses him to punish her hubby. Great idea. Please continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nice beginning

I like where this story is leading so far. I'm looking forward to the future chapters of how the weekend progresses. Please continue.

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