by Duleigh
I really enjoyed this. Your story will be mentioned in the New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout Forum on Lit's. Bulletin Boards. Thanks ~ Red
Your story was wonderful and incredibly hot! The only thing I noticed was poor Charlie disappeared and got replaced by someone named Steve at the end of the story...Change the name back and it'll be perfect.
Excellent, especially since you kicked Steve out and made it a threesome again. Loved the way Kelly got her revenge on Charlie and it certainly seemed Missy was a very willing accomplice in Charlie’s torture. Very clever payback for the public display, to deny him the vision, yet taunt him with the audio version. Glad you’re back; you have such evil ideas. 😈 😈 😈