by Duleigh
Excellent, especially since you kicked Steve out and made it a threesome again. Loved the way Kelly got her revenge on Charlie and it certainly seemed Missy was a very willing accomplice in Charlie’s torture. Very clever payback for the public display, to deny him the vision, yet taunt him with the audio version. Glad you’re back; you have such evil ideas. 😈 😈 😈
Your story was wonderful and incredibly hot! The only thing I noticed was poor Charlie disappeared and got replaced by someone named Steve at the end of the story...Change the name back and it'll be perfect.
I really enjoyed this. Your story will be mentioned in the New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout Forum on Lit's. Bulletin Boards. Thanks ~ Red