All Comments on 'The Right Submission'

Hot *and romantic. Love how it moved from playful innocence thru curiosity thru introspection, before steamy. Enjoyed that journey...thanks.

you had me the first half, I'm not gonna lie. almost put this down when will was doing will things. (my fault for not checking the tags, i know, though 'fault' is maybe a strong word since i loved where this ended up.) thanks for sharing this... it was both hot and painfully relatable. i suppose it doesn't need a follow-up—it's complete on its own—but i'd still like to see more of these characters. and i'm an absolute sucker for a grace.