All Comments on 'The Rim Chair'

by james92000

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FailedscoutFailedscoutabout 3 years ago

More Please!!!

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

It was good up until the blackmail part. Why can’t adults, especially paying adults, have sexy fun? I think there’s a bit of a problem with the consent as written - technically its rape - but it’s done in a hot way so it’s possible to overlook it. The ending, however, just feels lame.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Awesome start, love the blackmail part keep going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story can't wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Superb. Keep writing. One of the best debut stories I have read on this site.

FailedscoutFailedscoutover 2 years ago

James92000,

Where is part 2???

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