All Comments on 'The Ring of Kings Pt. 04'

I'm hoping that this story will continue.

Please continue!

I'm an avid reader. Not a writer. I have no idea as to the process you go thru when creating and writing. But you have a gift for it. You seem to have many stories in the works, but don't finish any of them before adding others. I see this a lot here. In many cases, life happens, some times death happens, but it brings an end to the stories with out an ending, forever. My only recommendation would be to finish a story to conclusion before starting another. Again, I'm not a writer. So have no idea if this would work in your process. But to have so many unfinished stories, adding bits to each, you may never finish any of them. I want to say I'm A fan. Really enjoying The Ring of Kings currently. Hope you continue to entertain us with your words here. Thank you. Tom

Tom, I appreciate your comments and am very happy you are a fan. I too am disappointed when a writer does not finish a tale. *Coughpatrickrothfuscough* without going into details, at times my focus drifts and I need a mental cleanser. Be that a new story, or new activity. There are also times when I go over a new chapter and actively hate where I took the story. As I write with a computer these days and not a typewrite, I can't just crumple up the monitor and toss it across the room like a poorly written page. That all being said, I will be trying to finish the final three chapters of "With Great Power" followed by two or three chapters of "The Fucking Princess" and "The ring of kings" and finishing "Genie Chronicles: EGenie". Unfortunately I will be publishing another new story chapter first. Stay tuned and enjoy the ride.

I really like this one so far. Interesting concept. 3 of my favorite themes, mind control, celebrities, and power.