All Comments on 'The Rise of Batgirl Ch. 01'

Always like sexy Batgirl Stories, this is a good start. Can't wait till next chapter.

But Barbara does not need to suck some old mans penis unless he has washed first! Some men DO keep their dicks clean you know! But she can get him back by beating the crap out of him when she becomes Batgirl.

Always enjoyed the Batgirl stories on this site. One or two tales had Commissioner Gordon ogling his daughter but nothing ever happened. I would so love to read about that. Until then, Batgirl On!

The language used seemed slightly confusing; it was not clear as to precisely what they were doing. Re-read it and see if you think they were in a clench, standing, sitting, etc. Half of the description indicated a simple foreplay while the other indicated they were locked together with him inside and not merely being 'serviced' by our heroine...

I'd like to thank everyone who has or will comment on my work, i will take all of your comments into consideration. i have written part 2, however in light of a few comments i will be editing it. it involves barbara forgetting her purse at a highstreet store, with sexy results :)

Liked it so far...maybe another wash & cut... thanks for sharing