All Comments on 'The Rise of Rachel Price T-Girl Pt. 07'

Too short. Just as you're getting into the story again, it ends.

thanks for letting me know. The next chapter will be out soon.

Denver/Rachel is really developing nicely. Good concept, pace and witty too.

So far, this story is just plain stupid!

Thanks, Marie I really wanted to do something different. I'm getting quite fond of Rachel.

Stupid in what way Goodnaour789? Can you be more specific?

One problem Abercrombie name is spelled differently through the story chapters. Otherwise good story.

yes, i love this story.

Mil