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Click here"You were going to fuck him?" Levant repeated.
"Something small to begin with. It's OK you know that. We have been OK with that. Charlie..."
Levant narrowed his eyes, "You were going to fuck him?"
"He just happened to be in the hotel. That's OK. He's a lot like you. If I could do him, I thought... If I could do him, then I could do you. If I can't come through, no one is disappointed. That's... that's what we both want, isn't it? Look, if it makes you feel any better, then if I were able to do this, then I could be exclusive."
"You were just going to fuck him? So you could do me?" Levant said she could see him wavering, "Nothing else?"
Rachel feigned surprise. "YES. What else could I do with him? One-night stand. One-hour stand... just to practice. For us. I promise whatever I can do with him, I can do with you. Just don't hurt him. It's not his fault."
Levant leaned back and drummed his fingers.
"We have a bug in that room. I can see everything that goes on. He's been watched since he arrived in the country. I hear everything. He thinks he's going to fuck Levant's wife. If he asks questions...I'm going to kill him. I will fucking stone cold kill him."
Rachel stood frozen. "Really? What about the police?"
Levant looked behind. "They are the police," Levant said, looking at the people on either side. "If you need to work here, you need a fixer, and I have Prince Rashid. So, like I said, if he's just getting his rocks off, then... then I'll let him live."
"So, you still want me to do it?" Rachel began. She had expected that Levant would make sure she didn't do anything she promised.
"You're going to practice, right? Well, practice," Levant said, his eyes turning dark. "If he comes, he lives."
Rachel interjected, "Look, it's my fault, not his. I just saw him. I surprised him with it. I'm the guilty party. How about we cut straight to the chase, eh?" Rachel said, smiling and approaching Levant. "How about we do it? How about we make love? Now, here? Right? You let him go. He's out of the equation. You let the small fry go. We can just chalk that up to experience."
Rachel got closer and closer to Levant. As she approached, she crouched down and then got onto her knees. "You can have me all night, every night. How about it? We can look at this in a couple of years' time as some kind of lovers' tiff. What do you say?"
Levant leaned forward, his piercing gaze penetrating Rachel's soul, as if he held the weight of the world in his intense eyes. A subtle curl formed at the corner of his lips, hinting at a mix of calculated intrigue and untamed desire. His voice resonated with an enigmatic power with each word he spoke, sending shivers down Rachel's spine.
"Don't change plans mid stream. You practice. If he comes, he lives. Then when your done you come to me. If I come.... he goes free. What's mine is mine."
Rachel, her heart racing, delicately brushed aside a stray lock of her flowing hair, revealing a countenance that mirrored a mix of apprehension and excitement. Her eyes, shimmering like precious gemstones, reflected the flickering light of the room, revealing the intensity of her fears.
"Yeah sure. This is great. We can do this." Rachel said.
As Rachel spoke, her voice carried a mixture of conviction and vulnerability, intertwining with Levant's magnetic presence. Each word hung in the air, pregnant with the weight of their fateful agreement. The room seemed to hold its breath, as if time itself had paused to witness this pivotal moment of negotiation. It was clear from the look Levant wasn't going to negotiate any further.
"WE are going to have a fantastic night together." Rachel said With measured grace, Rachel rose from her seat, her movements almost ethereal as she navigated the space to the door. "I just know it.... You'll see."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous10 months agoThis he/she is awfully dumb when it comes to this hunter shit. If Denver's in it to save his grandpa and mom, why in the hell would he risk it all to play spy. Denver's easy to see through and now he's risked everything, playing cop and certainly looks like Levants mole. How dumb.
annika_unknown10 months agoAfter that last series of comments regarding our author's ability to wrap themes inside of each other I'm reminded of Winston Churchill's comment just before WWII in reference to Soviet and Nazi Germany signing the infamous Non Agression Pact: "A riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma."
annika_unknown10 months agoSo much to analyze and so little time and space!
The secret to this story (if you can call it a secret. It seems obvious to me) relies on racheprice's wrapping the sexual material in a gender transformation process then wrapping the entire novel, story, or whatever into a very well-constructed plot with excellent characterizations. Sometimes the story arc becomes compressed to the point of needing transitions but racheprice has so much detail that a reader is captivated by the story and pulled in (I was going to say "seduced," but that's too much pun) to the point that readers can be forgiven for "what comes next." The plot is constructed in such a way that our author can switch directions rapidly without losing the readers' interest.
Additionally, readers are lead by the real-time (or nearly real-time) progress of Rachel's gender change. This device means that we aren't simply dumped into a sudden impossible change for Rachel. Racheprice has accomplished a masterly series of events and insights for Rachel stretching into time. Those insights are not "magic" where our Rachel character jumps into being a woman but racheprice instead uses Dr. Cooper as a plot device to point out Rachel's slow insight coupled with the slow recognition of Rachel as her gender is revealed to herself. A realistic supplement to her transition is sex with Charlie, sex with Peter and now forcing her to have sex with Hunter. It all leads to Douglas' sexual desire becoming real. At this point, of course, we can't know whether Rachel will ever have a sexual relationship with Douglas. That could happen unless Rachel is shot by Douglas or one of his criminal cronies.
The combination of slow realization of Rachel's changes, the slowly evolving sexual nature consistent with Rachel's insights, and the complicated plot line make reading this series a delight. There are any number of ways this could end: Rachel and Douglas live happily ever after, (doubtful). Douglas becomes bored with Rachel and lives with Lucy (even less likely). Or Douglas takes a bullet for Rachel after one of Levant's criminals decides (or is commanded) to remove Rachel. Or it could end up with Hunter and Rachel falling in love and the two of them putting an end to the scheme.
In any case, this is such a romantic and well-crafted piece of work that I can hardly believe it has appeared on Literotica, although I'm very happy that it has!
Annika
annika_unknown10 months agoThere is one point of confusion, at least for me. Why would Peter need Viagra? If he still has a penis then I understand or did I miss something a few episodes ago? I'll go back and re-read three previous episodes but I thought I should ask. There are so many details in these stories that are really important. Even if those details are in the notes it's important to read them carefully.
