All Comments on 'The Risky Thrill of Breeding a Wife'

Well, what happened? Did she get knocked up, did she confess to her husband, did he figure out her betrayal, or more? There not much of how or why they talked in the first place.

Great story please keep writing I loved it

Great story, especially for your first. Just watch your run on sentences. And remember that every time you change the speaker you need a new paragraph.

Otherwise, well done! Looking forward to reading more from you.