All Comments on 'The River Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So hot made me horny

IamboredtooIamboredtooover 1 year ago

(rap |= wrap; waste |= waist) five stars, though.

CuriousPeteCuriousPeteover 1 year ago

Just wow. That scene was unbelievably hot!.. Great writing. Definitely erection inducing! What joys await in the top bunk overnight. Keep it cumming!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So hot to have an appreciative (and jealous?) female audience!

odogrmodogrmover 1 year ago

WOW, So hot, is there more to the story?

dnsontndnsontnover 1 year ago

A magnificent ending to the scene. I do hope they have us follow them back to the hostel…

RobJasperRobJasperover 1 year ago

Just sensual, sexy & beautiful writing! Love it and hope there are more chapters soon!

Sunnydaze361Sunnydaze361over 1 year ago

I felt as if I was at the waterfall watching this sensual , sexy couple! Well done!

RuminoRuminoover 1 year ago

Absolutely wonderful! Please write more!

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