All Comments on 'The Role Players Pt. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I'm not sure a sub lifestyle is right for Felicity. There was no indication she leaned that way prior to her experience with the jerk that brought her down and stole her confidence and self esteem. I worry that she's latching onto the submissive role out of that same low self-esteem and lack of confidence as well as her awe of Holly. Just my 2 cents though. And it may be they're using the maid role to build her confidence as with Holly. I like that Holly has is getting less submissive outside the bedroom.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Love it

Been a fun ride so far. I really enjoy the mix of love and discipline. Look forward to future chapters

Abby_HartAbby_Hartalmost 6 years ago
Wonderful

I must appoligize for not posting a comment sooner, but I have been so taken in by the story all I wanted to do was read the next one! Holly is such a special gurl one could only dream of having a life like hers. All the sadness and hurt going perfectly along side the hapiness and joy. No ones life is perfect and you have shown that very well through the eys of Holly.

hollygurl29hollygurl29almost 6 years agoAuthor

to the person who left the anonymous comment about whether or not felicity is a sub you are absolutely correct. i struggled with introducing her into the already well established other three and probably took the easy way out of making her submissive. however, you are correct about her gaining more confidence while following holly's lead and in the end i think her relationship with Andrea will not be as much sub/domme as it will be a simple love story. thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. holly

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

So terrific Holly! I loved the introduction of Felicity.

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