by taylorstorms
Like how you pace this piece; the simmering hesitancy, bit of self doubt being swept away. Characters around Marie/Roommate series intriguing just as Blake was early on in your Camgirl series when she was wrestling erotically with being a Camgirl. I mention that time in your that series because you created palpable erotic tension within/around your MC just as you are doing throughout Roommate/Marie series. Make sense?
Yes! And I'm glad you like it, @mig! Hope you enjoy the rest of it just as much!