All Comments on 'The Rose Diaries v02 Ch. 03'

Terrifying yet enticing as always! Great chapter. This version feels even scarier than the original. Lovin' it so far.

YOURE KILLING IT! KEEP IT UP!

Glad to see you wrote a new story !

i feel so bad that i want her to just be broken and submit. like miss girl, it’s your best form of survival. i like how the collar was introduced in this version way more! the ritualistic aspect makes it feel more powerful. I feel like, considering the manor’s wealth and influence, shouldn’t there be a way for them

to program the collars to recognize incorrect names? like if he decides to speak his name or someone calls him it instead of Doll i feel like there should be a reaction. in the first story it made a bit more sense because the collars were amped up dog collars but these seem more advanced. just a thought! thoroughly enjoying the more horror aspect and fantastic writing!!

I hope there will be more focus on sex in this version. So far it looks like the focus is more on the psychological end. The writing is very good, though and I'm looking forward to more.

It would be great if there could be more focus on the sexual training of the "girls" and not just on the horrors and psychological stuff.

Hope you haven't given up on this, I was super excited to see it continue!