by goldenmyst
The writing isn't really bad, but this just doesn't do it for me. 3 Stars cd
Great application of your High School English courses but what a total waste of time and effort for you to come down to this pathetic story and for me to read the entire POS. There is an old Yiddish expression that when translated says something like Man plans and God Laughs. He is either laughing or moaning over this story.
Here is the thing. This story isn't erotica. In fact, none of my writing is. This is magical realism with an emphasis on magical. People loved it everywhere else. But fails as erotica for sure.
i think"goldenmyst" to be suffering acute constipation, bi-lateral absence of "Humour-us" bones, and an inhumane lack of any empathy, compassion, and moral compass if they can inflict this tiresome, boring, and sadistically inane Tripe upon us, to torture the minds-of-innocent-millions into mush, when they are GUILTY only of seeking momentary literary diversion!