All Comments on 'The Sacred Tunnel Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice story!

Excellent ! I love the parallel story thing. Nice literary device and beautifully executed here. Keep up the good work and post Pt. 02 soon !!!

QuantumanQuantumanover 12 years ago
Great Writing!

I love the period and your take on the matriarchal dominance of the ancient Celts.

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 12 years ago
Very nice.

I really enjoyed this and it is far from what I was expecting. I love the back and forth between the two time periods. Thanks so much for having me check out the link in your sig.! ~ Red

cfuhrercfuhrerover 12 years ago
Wonderful!

I have never been happier that I clicked on a link in a signature. Beautifully written and mesmerizing. I cannot wait to have time to read the other two chapters.

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
nicely done - this shows lots of promise

shifting from one time frame to another was handled well. sometimes that device can be clunky and distracting. you made it work while adding to the mystic and drama.

I am glad I found this.

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