by lakesailer_mi
Excellent ! I love the parallel story thing. Nice literary device and beautifully executed here. Keep up the good work and post Pt. 02 soon !!!
I love the period and your take on the matriarchal dominance of the ancient Celts.
I really enjoyed this and it is far from what I was expecting. I love the back and forth between the two time periods. Thanks so much for having me check out the link in your sig.! ~ Red
I have never been happier that I clicked on a link in a signature. Beautifully written and mesmerizing. I cannot wait to have time to read the other two chapters.
shifting from one time frame to another was handled well. sometimes that device can be clunky and distracting. you made it work while adding to the mystic and drama.
I am glad I found this.