All Comments on 'The Saga of Tallia the Unwilling Ch. 02'

This is Fabulous!!!

I love the scribe’s intro at the beginning, so clever and well worded. As for the rest of the story, I wonder if you laugh as much writing it as I do reading it. That kiss, ‘want your panties as floor decor’ kiss, just brilliant. More please, much more. Love this saga!!!

Seneb the Sub-Priest here. I will pass along your praises to the most exalted Thutmose-Neferkare, master of the Temple of Ra. Because you have both followed this translation and posted a comment, know that you are hereby officially granted reprieve from being eaten by the Crocodile-Hippo-Lion of damnation when you die. You are welcome.

Truly incredible. This tale you tell is full of all manor of things that a great adventure should entail. The passion that is shared among these heroes is clearly felt throughout your wonderful rendition. I await your next telling with a craving not felt for a long while.

O Nameless One, know that the temple has heard your praises and supplications and they are appreciated. Further we note that you recently sacrificed a lamb on the sacred altar of Ra. This has entitled you to one "Get Out of Plague of Locusts" protection amulet for free. You may collect your amulet in the gift shop near the entrance to the temple. Thank you. -- Seneb the Sub-priest