All Comments on 'The Saharan Affair'

by VivianBelle2021

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I couldn't get back to sleep. I opened my laptop. I read your story about the lady in Africa who is now in New York, A colleague went to New Zealand once. She rented a car and took pictures of herself standing in front of lakes and mountains,

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wait, what? The premise has potential. Unfortunately, this reads like a report, not a story. Romance requires feelings. I don't really read about any, nor do I get any.

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My name is Vivian. I am from New Zealand with dual NZ-US citizenship (born in NZ to a NZ mum and American dad), I lived California for 2 & 1/2 years where I did my both masters degree and my internship. I now work as a consultant and supervisor in the financial services indust...