All Comments on 'The Salesman'

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Husband needs to dump her ass and move on. There is no love there, more contempt. Time realize that she is a bitch that hates him.

Note if this goes any further she is in line to be a SS06 first wife.

Interracial moron Not LW's This was gross Another cuck hubby slut wife So boring Might as well castrate yourself

you need it

When an author knowingly puts an interracial, fetish story in LW, he/she should not be surprised when the comments are negative. This is nothing original, by the way -- chastity device, large cock (of course, the race is made into a major part of this), wimp cuckold, "but she reassured me she still loves me," etc.; enough said.

"When an author knowingly puts an interracial, fetish story in LW, he/she should not be surprised when the comments are negative."

Do you really not see how prissy, pretentious, and absurd that sounds? Who died and made you the category god?

The first LW story with an "interracial" tag was posted in December of 2000. It currently has a rating of 4.43. Interracial fantasies have always been a major presence in this category. It's only lately that this category has attracted a bunch of hysterical self-appointed censors who want to limit LW to simple-minded moralistic torch-the-bitch stories.

This particular story is pretty bad, but it's not bad because it doesn't fit your ideas of what ought to be allowed in LW.

Read the comments vulcan was right ,the story was flamed.

Duh,

You really really have to be a fag with a handle like that, as well as an illiterate cunt.

Vulcan is a purse-lipped prick.

Just because the bull is a black man doesn't change the category. It may be a crappy story or not - it fits the definition of LW as depicted by the site owners. It's been said before - some of the idiots need to go start their own site.

Bitch gets porker by a dick of a size only available on black porn sites or literoticia never mind that Herman the German is in doweled with twice as much meat and knows how to use it he Herman is also clean educated not sone dumb street boob. The pictogram of her and the street boob an Herman are no match the street boob is and always will be just a boob with an average size dick

Puke

Clearly the author has No working knowledge of female anatomy and even less knowledge of sex. Girth is fine, length is not. I know some girls are size queens, but having been fucked with 9"...let me say it hurts. A lot. I ended up in the hospital with a bruised cervix and bleeding. You want to talk about ruining the moment?

I could go on about the other issues in this teen fantasy, but I suggest the author have sex. With a girl. First.

But no matter where it goes, it suks....

No man would allow this

Wow...that...was horrible. And totally in the wrong category, I don't know which one but I think LIT needs to invent a new category for this story.

nigger fantasy

REALLY not hot at all

NOTHING NEW, WIMP SHIT AND IN THE WRONG CATEGORY

stop being BILLY

where's the problem. Freebie on the Big D. TK U MLJ LV NV

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The road was already going downhill when the lawyer got entranced by the looks of a college grad who was working below her capacity to support her party habit. It got a lot steeper when she demanded (and he acceded to) a Z3 because it fit her 'look'! When he allowed the arrogant salesman to isolate Sweety in the waiting area, it went beyond the 'event horizon!' The rest was unpleasant anti-climax!

of racist crap. Throw her ass under the bus ASAP!!!

A quick divorce would straighten that slut out in a hurry. The story is ridiculous.

jUST ANOTHER RACISTS NOT EVEN WORTH A ONE STAR STORY TRYING TO MAKE NIGGERS LOOK SUPERIOR. QUITE FRANKLY, I'D KICK THE SKANKY WHORE OUT ANDLET HER GO WITH THE NIGGER. SHE WOULD SOON FIND OUT THAT ALL HE USES HER FOR IS A CRACK WHORE, EARNING MONEY FOR HIM SO HE CAN SIT ON HIS BLACK ASS COLLECTING WELFARE.

No man would allow that shit. This story sucks. You don't know anything about sex.

according to some of the comment that all "US" black folks do. SO I guess I'll get out of the military and collect my welfare. Wow 21 years of working for no reason. Thanks Anon for opening my eyes.

Hmmmm.... I'm generally not a big fan of the proverbial "cuckoldress", but am a huge fan of women who call themselves, "hotwife". That being said, I thought this was a pretty hot story. I only hope you come out with a sequel very soon because you sort of left us hanging in the end.

the anonymous is right no real man would let another man fuck his wife. timmy is a pussy not a real man

I'm not a massive fan of cuckolding stories myself, but I do like them. I forwarded this to someone who is a massive fan though and they were totally blown away by this one. Very well done indeed. I gave it 5 stars. Ignore the fucking idiots who read stories they know they won't like just so they can spout shit in the comments.

Hot story, wish you would do more chapters. Get cuckold more involved. He could suck cock and swallow a load. Eat her creampies. Have a tranny fuck cuckold bare and raw and breed his ass as her lover and she watch. Clean the lovers cock. Dress in panties. Good story and got me hard and leaking

Hey, Devil, tell us more about your dreams...getting off at cuck-stories..

@ EgoTrixi Devilspy is the Bull (or who wannabe Bull) from the Hot wife Cuck and Bull triangle lifestyle.....Look at his comments. However what he would do, if a bisex cuck wanted to lick his cock????????

@ Duna and EgoTrixi

Guys, devilspy2001 only gets off on the idea of guy on guy action lol. Ever notice how women are barely mentioned in any of his deranged rantings and its nearly always dudes licking and sucking each other that he posts about.

Time to leave the closet devilspy......

Brilliant story - exactly what I like! BBC, cuckold, and the hard fucking of a slut wife!

1*

It's sad now that in any IR story the spouse has to be this wimp!

And I hope they are unwelcome if they try and return

throw the whore out thats all she is worth

Poor story line which has been covered better. No character development. Limp sex.

Whore takes on a cheap black dildo for the cuck.

Why don’t you cuck idiots ever describe a “big white cock” are you in lust for them and want to suck them?? You need to learn anatomy as a big cock is not unique to the black man!! Stick to your day job!!!!

5 stars for writer. Just don't enjoy cuck stories where hubby don't get to fuck the hot wife. He shares her to her her wet for himself. What thrill is it if he don't get any pussy anymore!

racist