All Comments on 'The Savant'

Need the next part!!!

Absolutely brilliant - I cannot wait for the next part (hopefully assuming there WILL be a next part)

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@anonymous @Telugu1 Thank you! There is indeed a second instalment that's mostly finished and ready, but I want to tighten it up and tweak it a little bit and then I will post it up so you can read it. x

Your writing style is a thing of beauty and brilliance. An absolute pleasure to read. I initially thought you might be a published author putting out part of a novel to get feedback. My only request would be that you include more relevant Tags. The heavy handed pain* used and the “water-sports” are just not my thing at all, for me watersports particularly are just gross. (* not a pain fan beyond spanking/ flogging)

Your savant is an interesting character, all too often men with big cocks are clueless about technique and lacking in finesse, assuming that a hard pounding will be enough. I loved that her boyfriend was happy with his submission. A lot of clichéd cuckold story presents the cuckold as worthless and act without his consent. Again that’s a negative for me personally, I’m a firm believer that provided everyone involved in a scene or relationship is a fully informed and freely consenting adult it’s all good. Reluctance is fine because that’s exploration of boundaries and limits. A live and let live approach.

Regardless of the aspects I didn’t enjoy it’s an absolutely outstanding chapter - 4 stars.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)