All Comments on 'The Scars of His Love'

What the fuck did i just read? And why is this in bdsm? This would fit better in either non-con or maybe erotic horror.

Thank you for sharing your story!

I see this your very first one, so I hope my words are helpful for you and your future tales. You have a great way of describing your character's feelings and the inner despair she has about being this sadistic man's sex slave. However, I was saddened to see how short it was.

It felt like you cut it off just when it was getting more nuanced, and I was invested to read more into why the lead was attracted to such a dark man despite her agony. I hope you lengthen your stories more so we could get a better idea of the chemistry between your characters and give us as readers enough time to get aroused at this horrifying, tantalizing erotica.

Keep up the good work! <3