by TheBrownestEye
Great story with really good verbal interaction between characters and well written and the content scat was perfect I love scat reading about it and in real life except my scat partner my wife died so now days all I get to do is read and play by myself which is not good compared to what I had keep up the good work and I cannot cannot wait for the next episode
Ray
This is a very well written story, and I very much look forward to more. Thank you for writing this.
Well written and interesting. This first chapter ended somewhat abruptly. I don't mind multi-chapter stories but this one really feels like you gave us half a story in the first installment. Still, looking forward to the next chapter.