All Comments on 'The School Ch. 02'

I am so glad that you wrote the second chapter of this story!! The suspense at the end of the first chapter was killing me... I would reread it again and again and every time, that sentence "Then we have a problem" would kill the mood (er... of my masturbation...) b/c I would start trying to imagine what the problem exactly was, what the school was like, etc. etc. and the blood would rush back up from my pussy to my brain... lol Anyways, this was an awesome chapter and I'm gonna be looking forward to the next one!

As a writer you clearly have full control over your erotic material - consistent to the end, like the all-knowing Martin.

Don't make us wait to long for the next chapters. WOW very very good

Well conceived and well written. Martin seems a little superhuman but it's a damn good story. Thanks, and looking forward to further chapters!

Fewer spelling/word choice errors in this one than in the previous, which is great. I can't wait for the next installment.

You crafted a great story. I can't wait to read more, and to read these again!

It was a great story to read, couldn't take my eyes off the page!! can not wait for more, hope they come very very soon! Loved it!

would like to see it continued. it brought me up to a peak and then it left me hanging

Like it, but there is to much " chatter" that do not add to the story, they only irritate and made me stop reading.

I like it. Where's the next chapter? And I like the chatter, it gives the characters depth - which I hear is important in a story.

Please write more