All Comments on 'The Scorned Young Woman Pt. 02'

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Will4900Will4900over 1 year ago

Love how this story is coming along

luvs2watchu2luvs2watchu2over 1 year ago

First chapter was nice, it set everything up. But Second is much better. Much more nasty sex, as it should be.

Mr, B is training Chelsea to be the true cum slut she has hidden very deeply, within herself. Please keep this story moving forward.

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Mmmmmm good little follow up, funny how men are expected to pay in all stories and how easy it is to get fucked in a changing room

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

When using "dad" as a pronoun instead of a name, always capitalize it, Dad. Such as, "It belongs to Dad." If using it as a general reference to that person, it's not capitalized: "It belongs to my dad." Ahhh, English... That's one of those master touches that makes good writing great writing.

maddictmaddict6 months ago

Very nasty, not so much the story, it's the sales ladies that were nasty. Good job Daddy

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Who am I? I am the Friendly Light, Lumiere Amie. Draw near and enjoy the pleasure of reading about your secret wishes—wishes you dare not speak. In my former life, I authored technical reports; now, I enjoy writing about my darkest, most twisted impulses. I hope you'll discove...