All Comments on 'The Sea of Darkness Ch. 03'

Looking up. Piracy is a barbaric undertaking almost all writers gloss over the rough edges. You found one and explored it a bit.

I dislike most scenes with many characters, you are not the only one having a hard time with them. I liked this one though, you focused on the main character, which made not knowing the other characters less of a problem.

I also dislike sex scenes with too many characters. My usual limit is a threesome or two pairs, unless of course I am committed to reading a series. As for actually writing one myself, forget it. This was written more than passably well, however. As igorio says, the scene focused on the central character.

Like the story, any plan to continue?