All Comments on 'The Secluded Pool'

Loved this story!

What a wonderful story. A perfectly pitched seduction - no crass or overbearing force - just beautiful....

This story was whimsical and erotic. It was sexy and I agree with the other person that left the comment, it wasnt too overbearing or crass. I like the fact that she wasnt tall either. I love stories with big, tall strong males with shorter women. I'm 5Ft tall myself..*winks*

-From a fellow Lit Writer.

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I love the story, it was sooo good. It made me slightly sad at the end of it though. Make another part, please. Anyways, it was awesome.

Beautiful story, ignored for many years by the look of it too, a little non-con perhaps, but it fitted with the story and the basic need to procreate that is endemic to anything deemed alive. 5⭐️

Thanks