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All Comments on 'The Secret Chamber'

by Fantasy_by_Jackie_Swan

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I disagree. I thought it was fantastic. I felt Celine naïveté and fear. Added to the tension. 5 stars.

magnum6905magnum69059 months ago

I thought this was very well written. I could imagine the sex details. I appreciated the process that he took them through.

bobbycull55bobbycull557 months ago

Well written, but too "vanilla" for the scene that you set up.

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I have written for a few years now and although I've enjoyed it, I never felt it was good enough to actually share it. Now, I've decided to give myself a little push and publish it. I am still working on the "Diplomacy: A princess's guide series" but I have a few other piece...