All Comments on 'The Secret Island (Ch. 01-03)'

by mrfudan

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LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 1 year ago

So, why doesn't Jessica just pack up and return to the States. Her dickhead husband is cheating on her and she is doing NOTHING to stop it or even tackle him about it. Go to the place where he's living and working and see for yourself what is happening. Why is she being such a weak woman? If his actions are confirmed, return to the States and divorce the prick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

FYI: picaresque adjective . of, relating to, suggesting, or being a type of fiction dealing with the episodic adventures of a usually roguish protagonist

mrfudanmrfudanover 1 year agoAuthor

Drawing a total blank as to why "picaresque" was used, but thanks, good point. I may have been thinking

picturesque and didn't catch they typo. Thanks!

As for Jessica's motivations, well, I guess saying this is smut isn't an excuse...haha. Why didn't Rhaenys say "Drakaris" the other day? Well, show would be over...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow very unique setting. I like the creativity here. As for LenardSpencer's comment, if Jessica behaved as in real life, then there wouldn't be a story. Why are people like that even on an EROTIC FICTION site?

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