All Comments on 'The Secret Lover'

A nice piece this, with an interesting theme. Nicely written and a very pleasant storyline. With more care this could be a good poem.

I wonder if "masturbating" might be a better category? I was hoping for a bit of romance, and although a lovely story it felt lonely. I also stumbled over a typo. I thought she was doing lunges? (You meant lungs.). A good story overall.