by prettybluemonkey
You've been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout.
Loved the way you built to the climaxes with the pacing and structure of the last large paragraph. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for sharing this story of yours. The plot sounded intriguing and the writing sealed the deal. Nicely erotic and stimulating, this series should shape up nicely. I'd love to know when the next chapter is available. Let me know! Also, please continue writing, both this series and starting others. Thanks!
What a very intriguing start to a promising story. I want to see how she is dressed and used in her new job.
Damn! This was good...were you watching those years ago when it happened???