All Comments on 'The Secretary'

by prettybluemonkey

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pixie2002pixie2002almost 18 years ago
Nicely done

And the beginning of what promises to be a very sexy series.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittalmost 18 years ago
Mentioned

You've been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Mine

I think that's pretty much how my wife got her first job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nicely

Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great pace

Loved the way you built to the climaxes with the pacing and structure of the last large paragraph. Keep up the good work.

TonyTheTiger88TonyTheTiger88almost 18 years ago
Exciting

Thanks for sharing this story of yours. The plot sounded intriguing and the writing sealed the deal. Nicely erotic and stimulating, this series should shape up nicely. I'd love to know when the next chapter is available. Let me know! Also, please continue writing, both this series and starting others. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Part II

What a very intriguing start to a promising story. I want to see how she is dressed and used in her new job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Were you watching???

Damn! This was good...were you watching those years ago when it happened???

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