by bluedott
Another in the long line of authors who seem to think Indian women are dumber than stumps. UGH!
1 star
Indians need to stop writing this cuck shit. Stop embarassing the rest of us. God.
You plot is good and hope to get a very good series. Don't look the odds comment. Just write as you like
This beginning has a very natural set up, very realistic and hence a turn on!
Good going. Nicely written. Enjoyed reading it. Keep it natural just like that. Thats the best.
Nisha