All Comments on 'The Seduction'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Any man who thinks 135 pounds is "stumpy" and "stubby" needs a good swift kick in the junk, that's what I think.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I couldn’t finish it. One of those stories that was so blatantly written by a clueless man. He spends as much time belittling her appearance as anything else. And somehow thinks 135 pounds makes someone fat?

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I write very amateurish fantasy for my own amusement and hopefully for others. I am strictly a two-fingered typist, so stories take hours to complete and sometimes finish due to cramping, resulting in careless editing and sudden stops. I attempt to present views from bo...