All Comments on 'The Seduction'

by Schaka

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Reggie2xxReggie2xxover 1 year ago

Luv your story want to be my neighbor?

JynnyJynnyover 1 year ago

Absolutely breath-taking....was unable to walk away to answer my ringing phone, once I started reading this erotic tale of LOVE; who ever it was, I'll call them back later!

Only on a note of "constructive criticism" as I have not read any of your other stories' you may have other character names in them....is that I noticed you used the name of Karen (twice) as Janet was the wife of Jeff. Regardless, for me I had no problem with the interruption of name Karen.....Kudos my friend!!!

SchakaSchakaover 1 year agoAuthor

jynny, my apologies! I self edit and missed that!

Reggie2xx, I'm glad you liked my little tale!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lovely story and well written. I was saddened by the last paragraph, five stars from me.

FitGuy47FitGuy47over 1 year ago

What a great tale, the details were perfect. I felt as if I was Jeff often reading this. I have never had a BBC, YET. But reading this certainly makes me want to. Thanks for sharing

Lars420Lars420over 1 year ago

Excellent story !

odogrmodogrmover 1 year ago

WOW, I COULD NOT STOP READING! 5 STARS

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the golden blond hair on Jeff's sexy man chest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was hot as fuck man

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. Yep, a few beers, a shot and a nice joint (as opposed to the THC brownie) were enough for me to leave a bar with an older guy. Another beer and shot and I was sucking my first cock. I guess I needed the prerequisites to get me to take the plunge, or was that receive a plunging? ha

undies4lifeundies4lifeover 1 year ago

A beautiful story! As a man who once had BBC, I will attest one never forgets and always craves it.

I love how this story unfolds. Every gay man has a fantasy to seduce his sexy straight neighbor!

BiParkerGuyBiParkerGuyover 1 year ago

Hot story but was it Janet or Karen?

billrhbbillrhbover 1 year ago

The story was very arousing EXCEPT the author couldnt remenber the wifes name was Janet, not Karen.

annabellebritoannabellebritoover 1 year ago

Great story! I always a have a thing for straight to bi seductions! Great hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Beautiful story. I felt I was there. Would like to be DeAndre !

BonebibrainBonebibrain4 months ago

Great fucking story… had me hard from the hot tub to the mountain top 😊🫨😜😄🫨

Great beginning, middle and ending… I actually wished it didn’t end… but as to fantasy’s is to life!

Still want more please… God, I would love to be in ur head 🤔😊🤔

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I have always been a very handsome, completely straight in appearance, hidden in plain sight yet unabashed bisexual man when the right man seduces me. I always enjoyed the attention and am flattered when sexy virile men and often submissive men just seem to feel it's worth the risk to make a pass.

I love this story, I have seduced straight guys and with minor changes this story could have been one of my true life adventures. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Oh yea! What a great story & so hot too. In our society we have an artificial dichotomy between straight & gay sex. It's ridiculous because sex is so good with both sexes. There are times when I prefer men and other times when I'd rather have a woman. The sex with both is just so damn good!

I enjoyed the seduction process; although Jeff seemed to want it from the beginning. How would a seduction work with a more resistant man, especially a single man who is banging different women each week. That would be an interesting and arousing story.

Thanks for the great story!

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