All Comments on 'The Seduction of Cherry Supreme'

by ErichKassler

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

That was a very well written and powerful first story. It might have benefited from a little more backstory on either or both main characters but it didn’t detract from the story whatsoever. The ending seemed sad since he left Cherry with that longing for him although she was still able to move forward. Excellent job and I loo forward to enjoying more of your future works.

Mitchell

ErichKasslerErichKasslerabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thank You. It's very good of you to say so.

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