All Comments on 'The Seduction of Lori Pt. 04'

Love this story.

Great story so far…..the suspense is killing me. Now we have a black coworker she might make a play on. Still hope there’s a pregnancy risk involved when the deed is done.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Nice setup to allow a reasonable opportunity for Ryan to visit Duane and Lori's home...

Great story line... can't wait for future episodes!

this is starting to get really good don't stop now

Ryan, your writing keeps getting better and better! You have both my husband and I hooked on your Lori series…so hot and such a tease! The only thing I can say is to write faster!! We are living our fantasies through Ryan and Lori. My husband would love to see me experience this and I’m starting to come around to his way of thinking. You are a master wordsmith and we can’t wait until next chapter! Wonderful wonderful wonderful!! Alexandra and Paul

Loving the setup, I hope Lori sticks with the sneaking and it doesn't turn into the usual cuckhold story with the husband cheering them on.

Another nice read. Next round should start off Lori and Duane leaving and hot play ride home and into bedroom. Duane takes care of her, but once she drains him he hits dreamland. Ol' Ryan now has his chance to seduce her on her door step still flushed from the tasty wine. Make her feel that meat deep in her throat up against the steps railing....

'seducted' tag? Really? Seduced, perhaps? Then again, this 'author' does appear to be borderline illiterate.

Damn the suspense and the long seduction is killing me! I need next 3 chapters right now thats how hard I am! I have no doubt Ryan will fuck this pretty little white wife's brains out. Wouldn't mind the black co worker also tries to seduce Lori next as he seemed already successful with the engaged Brunette

HOT chapter!!! 🔥 🔥

Please, go on soon 😉

A great build of anticipation....

Good work up for some fun for Lori and Ryan. Keep writing.

Ready for chapter 5 nowww

To anonymous who recognized I misspelled seduced - you’re right. A rookie mistake. I will try harder to proofread my work before publishing. Thank you for the edit.

Ryan.

Brilliant story, long may it continue

Love it so far please keep going with this

Duane needs to snap outta his bullshit and get wise to losing his dumb wife. She belongs to the streets

The slow build up is excellent.

Damn, this story is great!

Great story but enough teasing ….. time for dessert!

Thank you for this story. So far I have enjoyed this series. To the anonymous below, to say that the author was borderline illiterate was unnecessarily rude. Tiny mistakes have little impact on a good story. So once again thank you author I am moving on to the next part. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

the slow burn and tentative steps of Lori and Ryan feel genuine. Building the pressure until the things explode when they stumble into an opportune moment to give in to the passion.