by voluptuary_manque
A very good story with an interesting premise. I really like it.
This was a very unique and very well written story. Wonderful job!
I had never read this catagory before. I sure picked a dandy. A great first read.
A very well written story but I have to say I find the topic weird and disturbing.
An interesting premise carried through into an interesting story ... Good job.
Cool sequel, VM. I can see a series emerging from these tales, not unlike the crocus in spring. Well done.
an enticing and imaginitive story, both enjoyable from a narrative perspective and arousing. i thoroughly enjoyed it. i hope you have plans for a sequel at the very least, perhaps even a series. i would be interested in reading of the sexual exploits of Hyacinth and Horatio. i am also curious what you come up with in regards to the hybrid species. many thanks.
Very well written, good pacing and imaginative. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I do hope you'll continue the narrative.
This was fun and well written, but the sex was quite brief. I'd love to see more!