All Comments on 'The Selection Ch. 02'

Again, interesting ideas somewhat sabotaged by basic writing errors. It's=it is, whereas its=thing belonging or pertaining to it. Also, you have issues with the shifting of point of view as well as verb tenses, as well as the sentence fragments and redundancies of part 1. (actually, I think the verb/POV shifts were in pt. 1 as well, although I know I didn't mention them in the comment.)

On to pt. 3.

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