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by DivinaTravesty

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More......

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 2 years ago

Helluva first story, my friend. You've got a real fascinating world set up, you conveyed your main character's fear and helplessness well, and the sex scene was very hot.

Gumby603Gumby603over 2 years ago
Great story

You need to keep this going. Awesome 👌

txcrackertxcrackerover 2 years ago
I liked it !

It was funny !

Thanks for the read ! BTW 5*'s

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That was one of the most surprising endings I have ever read. You have a grand imagination and a wonderfully descriptive writing style. 5/5

Crusader235Crusader235over 2 years ago

Haha, lots of worst ways to live.

DirtyOlMan1954DirtyOlMan1954over 2 years ago

I mentioned in the comments of your other story that I am not typically a big fan of sci-fi...but perhaps you have changed that for me. I'll be curious to see if the characters and story lines merge - I hope so

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Someone once said to me, "Gimme all your alien, PVC, nun, demonic, angel, big tit, cum slut mommies!" I laughed and told him, "Challenge Accepted." I've been honing my writing as a hobby since middle school. I've always found erotica to be some of the most enjoyable stuff ...