All Comments on 'The Senior Class Trip'

Very sexy, very well written. Totally realistic.

how nice it would have been to have joined them

Hi, Paisley

That was a terrific story, and I will look forward to more stories from you. All the best to you and your future female partners.

More please!

Very erotic and very well done. It was not overdone as is the case with most of these writings including my own.

GUrl U r Awsome.. To tell u the honest thruth i was a pulsatin mess lmaoo... I love it, it was real Not a out of reach Plot.. THAT WAS GOOD GURL!!! MUAH ..FROM BUTTAFLY :)

An absolute dream experience. Wonderfully written, erotic, thoughtful, romantic & believable. Very well done.

- Dana

I thought your story was incredible - woman are just beautiful and the two in your story are sooo passionate.

it was real goo! just imagining it is electrifying!! that was awesome!!

Please continue this great story. What you wrote is the start of something beautiful and I would love to read a longer more detailed accounted of these newfound lovers. Absolutely awesome writing!