by Paisleybug
Please continue this great story. What you wrote is the start of something beautiful and I would love to read a longer more detailed accounted of these newfound lovers. Absolutely awesome writing!
it was real goo! just imagining it is electrifying!! that was awesome!!
I thought your story was incredible - woman are just beautiful and the two in your story are sooo passionate.
An absolute dream experience. Wonderfully written, erotic, thoughtful, romantic & believable. Very well done.
- Dana
GUrl U r Awsome.. To tell u the honest thruth i was a pulsatin mess lmaoo... I love it, it was real Not a out of reach Plot.. THAT WAS GOOD GURL!!! MUAH ..FROM BUTTAFLY :)
Very erotic and very well done. It was not overdone as is the case with most of these writings including my own.
Hi, Paisley
That was a terrific story, and I will look forward to more stories from you. All the best to you and your future female partners.