by JPMMURPHY
Excelent. A must read. What a way to tell a story. Could have combined some of the chapters though --- kinda short for a few. Thanks JPM
Yes, this is the end. I had so many great anonymous comments, here and mailed to me, that I wanted to find a place to say thanks. Your encouragement and enjoyment means a lot to me.
Thanks again and hope you really did enjoy the read.
JPMMURPHY
Thank You JPM I really loved that ending with Jack and Jan being saved maybe they will make a come back later on in the future you keep up the super story writing JPM and thank you very much.
Atlanta,Ga
This was such an incredible story! Top quality. It's not everyday you find something of this caliber.